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January 6, 2010
Its not like I can stop,
I can’t just leave it all behind,
I know I can’t tell anybody,
but I can’t get it off my mind,
I haunts me like a ghost,
hangs over me like a storm,
but somehow you can’t see it,
beneath this act that I perform.
I’m such a hypocrite,
a liar, a horrible friend,
but I’m too scared to tell you,
scared our friendship will end.
We’re going in circles,
my life’s become a carousel,
I want so badly to just get off,
to escape this living hell.
© Kimberly C., Houston, TX
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This article has 97 comments.
amanda16 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:01 pm
I really liked this poem! I liked how it rhymed and it was meaningful.
ashaaley said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:49 am
omgg this poem is amazing i wanna like frame it and put it on my wall, story of my life, AMAZING♥ (:
marisaXangela BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:48 am
great poemmmm, story of my lifee
Eric DeMeo said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:00 am
nice rhyming
AlexSerino said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:56 am
this is a really good ballad, i like how you rhyme:)
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:05 pm
thank you so much! I try to make everything so that it is easy for a reader to connect, and ultimately come to love, because they understand it. =D
justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:53 pm
i tagged this as a favorite, i really loved this. i love the line "It haunts me liek a ghost, hangs over me like a storm, but somehow you can't see it, beneath this act that i perform." i also like "Im such a hypocrite, a liar, a horrible friend." you a great author. i can tell you put a lot of thought behind this.
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 9:21 pm
aww thanks <3
i really appreciate it
i really appreciate it
lovelytonight93 GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 9:18 pm
hey so im gonna make this my favorite piece on this site <3
i love this poem!!!! =D
i love this poem!!!! =D
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 9:13 pm
thanks, and who says i was able? and yeah, ill look at your work right now... thanks for the comment!! =D
GreenLover SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:49 pm
i can so relate to this. i feel you. except i was never able to get off. hahaha can u look at some of my work?
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 11:39 am
=D thank you so much, lailie =P
lailazohra SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:11 am
wow, you are such an incredible writer, hannie. :] this poem is truly amazing. <3 loveee it
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 7:14 am
ok, so apparently all the links went through now... so theres like 6 links to finding the cure right here... haha thats so weird!
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:40 am
Thanks!!!!!!!!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:40 am
sure thing go ahead... haha
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:39 am
yup and at least you dont cut yourself like other people i know. and i do like your cyclops that you made earlier!!! would you mind if i use it?!?!?!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:38 am
nope... link wont go through... well if anyone wants to see it you can look at other poems by me. Read/rate/comments are very much appreciated... THANK YOU!!! =D
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:37 am
http ://teenink .com /poetry/song_lyrics/article/152121/Finding-the-Cure/
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