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Cautious, opening up the door
I spot my life-long enemy.
I smile politely, then ignore
Her smiling smugly back at me.
I shake my head, she shakes hers too,
Miming me grotesquely;
I sigh, and she just mocks anew,
Mimicking my misery.
But, no. I guess I'm really not,
Not so THAT unhappy,
But her. I look at her and stop;
Finding budding sympathy.
Familiar face, familiar eyes,
Her need to always copy me.
How can I, how can I despise
My Mirror, my first wannabe?
No! I smile. After all,
To imitate is flattery!




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wordnerd54This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
yesterday at 10:40 pm:
What a clever poem! I really liked this!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 10:53 am :
Thanks. Glad you did!
 
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YellowRose79This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15 at 12:23 pm:
Really enjoyed this, I've been in situations like that and this explains it really well!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 16 at 11:33 pm :
I'm glad to hear so, thanks for taking the time to comment! I enjoy hearing peoples thoughts.
 
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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4 at 10:02 am:
Christi!  WOW!! That flowed awfully welll.....I Loved the rhythm! Awesome....The fun way you described how she's your enemy and then the realization,, real cooll!! Gotta go,,, classes! Talk later. LOve, Dua!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 6 at 11:26 pm :
Good luck in class! Thanks for reading my poem, Dua.
 
SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8 at 1:39 pm :
HAha, Thanks! Love.
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 26 at 11:05 am:
I really like this! the only thing is that you have a few periods where they are not supposed to be and that makes it kind of hard to read. 
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 26 at 2:37 pm :
I know! I have NO CLUE how they got there.... perhaps I grabbed an unedited version when I put it up....? Who knows. But It makes me cringe to read it, I always have to take a breath and reread it again, mentally removing them to be happy...
 
Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 26 at 7:29 pm :
hahah I know exactly how you feel....maybe you could edit it and then resubmit it?
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 29 at 9:21 pm :
Hmm... no. it takes time for that, and though I've done it before, I only do it if I'm really happy with it.
 
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mollybug13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24 at 12:19 am:
I love this this the rhyme pattern is great and its put together perfectly. 5/5
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 28 at 11:05 am :
Oh, wow! Thanks!!!! I didnt think anyone would like it enouh for that rating...
 
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BubbsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3 at 2:22 pm:
I loved it! You told a story but managed to make it mysterious and able to have many interpretations at the same times. Aweeesome! xx
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 28 at 11:04 am :
Haha, thankyou. :)
 
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MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILoveYouThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 3:20 pm:
I'm on an ipad so I'm not going to rant. But I thoroughly enjoyed this. It made me smile!
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 7:07 pm :
I am glad. That's what its for, thats why its so cheesy.
 
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 2:00 pm:
Reminds me of Sylvia Plath's "Mirror" only this one is happier.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 7:05 pm :
Thankyou! Although I think Plath did a better job, better flow and better imagery, I am glad to find that it to be a little less negative. Hers seemed a little creepy to me
 
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SuNshiNe007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 14, 2012 at 8:17 am:
I like this. Its something new:) Great job! Sorry I couldnt get to yours sooner but I've been soo busy..Keep up the great work
 
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