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Daniel

January 27, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski


Was walking through the forest, I
Was thinking of a time.
When heroes didn’t fight with swords
And still they conquered crime.

Was sitting on a fallen log,
and trying to forget.
The things around me faded, and
I saw a silhouette.

It was a boy, from long ago,
He came before my eyes.
His name was Daniel, he was young
but he seemed very wise.

He touched the frown upon my lips,
And asked me what was wrong.
“It’s fear,” I said, “It’s everywhere,
The brave don’t stay for long.”

He smiled and withdrew from me,
I thought him gone for good.
But then I looked and saw him come,
And fearfully, I stood.

“What is that thing that you have there?”
I asked in puzzled voice.
“It’s nothing but a story, girl,
the power of a choice.”

I asked why a choice would tell me
How courage can be found.
He laughed again and said to just
Listen without a sound.

“Once ago,” he said to me, and
I stood breathlessly.
“There was a boy who loved a God,
who loved him endlessly.

“In fact he was so honest and
hardworking that God smiled.
But others who were jealous thought
Him backwards and defiled.

“One day they worked a plan out, that
would trap him and condemn.
The king must be worshipped by all,
No other god but him.

“The wicked men sat by and watched,
The boy heard of the law.
And while he knew the danger, he
Prayed where the others saw.

“A boy not bound by temptation
or fear or any threat.
They threw him in the lion’s den,
To pay the martyr’s debt.

“They underestimated the
kind of courage that heals.
That heals instead of waving swords,
A prayer, a faith that’s real.

“God shut the lions’ mouths so that
they would not devour.
A wild tamed and subdued, to
Save a boy with great power.”

The boy was finished speaking then,
He settled on the ground.
He looked so peacefully at ease,
A calmness very loud.

At last I had to say my part,
That I did not believe.
“The boy was saved by God,” I said,
“Not courage — he’s naïve.”

“Innocence and faith can do what
violence never can.
Who’s more brave, the soldier or
The boy who hates no man?

“Love will never destroy what
is brave or kind or true.
The bravest act of all holds not
A sword, but pure virtue.”




He vanished and I searched about,
But couldn’t find his face.
And then I knew, without a doubt,
The boy knew God’s embrace.

He must have been an angel sent
From somewhere up above.
To teach me what true courage is,
A never-ending love.

I thought about the story that
Daniel had told to me.
And realized I was wrong about
The boy in the story.

It’s not when facing lions that
Your courage comes to call.
It’s trusting God no matter what
And jumping in at all.



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on Feb. 12 2013 at 4:33 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Wow, thank you for the amazing compliment! It means a lot:)

on Feb. 12 2013 at 3:25 pm
Alexandrathepoet PLATINUM, Leesville, South Carolina
35 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
If nothing else, believe in art.
~Unknown

I find this poem incredably amazing, and so touching. I think this is one of the best poems I have seen on this site.

on Feb. 12 2013 at 9:51 am
ArmyChick SILVER, Lake Park, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Live like its your last day,*People say practice makes perfect, but then they say there is no such thing as perfect, thats why i stopped practicing,*silly boys trucks are for girls,*you dont want to get to your distination and not remember the trip.

I really like this.

on Feb. 7 2013 at 4:18 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thanks:) it's one of my favorite stories

on Feb. 6 2013 at 6:48 pm
praise_pray_write BRONZE, Wexford, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
...just breathe...

I LOVE this!. You are a fantasticly talented poet! loved this different twist on the story of David through poetry. Kept me captivated and really taught a lesson instead of just telling a story. Fantastic work!  

on Feb. 5 2013 at 6:34 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I agree with you. I was inspired by this story because of what Daniel faced. He was willing to give up everything (including his fancy gov job) for god, including his life.

on Feb. 5 2013 at 6:31 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thank you, I appreciate it!

on Feb. 5 2013 at 5:28 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
42 articles 9 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

The poem is very refreshing to read.  The story about Daniel put into poetry was very interesting.  Nice work!

on Feb. 5 2013 at 5:15 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
8 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

Loved. Just loved. We need more poems about faith because no matter how much you talk about ppl just don't care. They put their faith in materials and money. And themselves. We've made ourselves gods.

on Feb. 5 2013 at 8:45 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Ah, thanks!

on Feb. 4 2013 at 10:57 pm
Kat_Poetry BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But without the dark, we would never see the stars"

So good. I'm jealous of your talent.

on Feb. 4 2013 at 1:22 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Well, funny story. I've shown it to my dad, who's a pastor:) thanks for the feedback!

on Feb. 4 2013 at 10:46 am
RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get"Forrest Gump
"Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means for getting"Peterpan

This is an AMAZING  piece of work! The story of Daniel happens to be one of my favorites in the bible. I love how it flows and how you wrote it, it makes the story even better. I also like how you taught a lesson through this poem. God has given you a gift beyond compare, keep writing you are going to inspire more though the words. Have you shown this to your youth pastor or pastor? If not you should! I can already tell that they are going to love it as well. 

on Feb. 2 2013 at 3:37 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thanks! I see what you mean about posting religious stuff, but this was near and dear to my heart. Plus I wasn't trying to attack anyone else's beliefs, this was purely me trying to stay positive:)

on Feb. 2 2013 at 2:25 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Fantastic. Purely incredible. Personally, I refrain from posting things about my religion, etc., but I think you captured a perfect scene very wlel and drew it in our heads with a fine pen. I think this story can relate to anybody, whether or not you believe in God. Impeccable job. I'm truly impressed.

on Feb. 2 2013 at 12:28 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thank you, that's very nice of you to say!

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on Feb. 2 2013 at 12:25 pm
flanny SILVER, Madison, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You must do the thing you think you cannot do." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

WOW...just wow. This is amazing. You are truly talented. I loved it! I have nothing to critique. Beautiful :)

on Feb. 2 2013 at 12:23 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Comments, anybody?