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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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j-rye This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 11:58 pm:
it reminded me of 10 things i hate about you... and thats a very good thing lol
 
communicativedistractions replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 7:05 pm :
haha same here!!
 
dewdrops replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 6:42 pm :
woah i was thinking the same exact thing. great minds think alkie
 
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AnonyMiss said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 10:31 pm:
i love the phrase "precious jerk" and the rythm of this poem. very well written
 
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Dackary This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 10:25 pm:
really well written! :D
 
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starrr7 said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 4:12 pm:
this really expresses your feelings, it's very relatable, i like it!
 
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Ariel_Rosario said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 3:36 pm:

I LOVE this! You're definitely talented! :P

 

-Ariel

 
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just-a-joy said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 2:36 pm:

my fave line is you precious jerk 

i ilikea guy  like that right now lol

 
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missj15 said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 11:53 am:
This poem was really good & creative . :)
 
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D!zzy!23 said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 10:07 am:
I really like this poem.It is sweet , and it is something I can agree with from personal experiance!
 
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chica-de-sonrisa said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 8:22 am:
hey i really do like this poem, my ex was a deuch lol. i really hate to be a scammer but i need some feedback on my work could you maybe look at it sometime?
 
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Deszy6028 said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 6:26 pm:
This is a really good poem and ive heard alot this poem reminds me of my bf sorta but anyway this has 2 b the best poem ive heard all day
 
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mrose911 said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 12:59 pm:
This poem is awesome!!!! Isn't it funny how the jerks can sometimes be soooo perfect!!! *sigh*
 
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babyblue16 said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 8:53 am:

THIS IS A GREAT POEM!!!!

 

 
GoldenStateCourtenay replied...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 8:57 am :
Really good, and creative, well done! :)
 
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haleyrl said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 8:45 pm:
I love this poem! Good job!
 
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numbheart21. said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 6:39 am:
kyaa~! so cute! I could easily relate to every word your poem says. ^^ love it! :)
 
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Swrilingpaint This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 1:24 pm:
very very good (: keep it up!
 
Mr.Mercer13 replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 4:00 pm :
that was a beast poem i mean that came from da heart you know somebody who love dey girlfriend wrote the loving poem
 
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SuperEeks said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 10:17 pm:
Wow! You NAILED my current life! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this!! Every single word is GREAT! Thank you!
 
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GraniaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 3:40 pm:
This is so true to my life. Beautiful job.
 
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