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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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luckyducky said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 6:52 pm
this is one of the best poems i have ever heard!!
DallysGrrl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 6:39 pm
That is so real and I've been through the same exact thing. The flow is beautiful, and you could tell you have a natural talent.
Crossingmyfingers SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:12 pm
I love this simplicity and flow... I love what you said in this...
SaraRoxsHerSox SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 4:49 pm
Wow! Beautiful poem! Keep writing!
VampiericRain GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 3:49 pm
I relate EXACTLY to this poem. And I know someone, too.
Maddiewrites13 GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 3:28 pm
Awesome...I love how well I can relate to it :)
violinistforlife SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 12:06 pm
This is amazing!!! I know someone who is just like that. Great job!!!
christin.bass SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 12:14 am
this was amazingly constructed. it was so simple yet held so much emotion. it is beautiful! well done.
amber phillips BRONZE said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 8:47 pm
i totally agree!!! i love this poem.
GreenStage said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:33 am
I Love This Poem...because i can really relate to it...so great job with this one!
Your mom said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:30 am
This poem truly shows how you either fictionally like someone or like a real person. It is creative, and the rhyming sequence works well with your words. (*_*)
SharpestSatire said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 2:41 pm
very creative and bittersweet. love the rhythm and the person speaking about the jerk they like/love/have a crush on. ^^ very cool! kudos!
fiveinside2 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 9:13 pm
Oh my gosh! I love this! The voice is so perfect. :) This is really great! :D
mz.gemini92 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:27 pm
i luv this poem it's very creative and different keep on writing and ill keep on listening
lemonygirl97 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:08 pm
I love this poem like PeaveLoveME(: said keep on writing.
PeaveLoveMe SILVER said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 5:46 am
awesome! keep writing! everyone plz check out my work! :)
Mostly_Dead said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:51 pm
Good rhythm, and rhyme
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