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     Interest Introduces
Curiosity’s Curse.
Shyness Showers
Love with Loneliness.
Hoodwinked Hope,
Decorated with Desire.
Panoramic Panic and
Jeering Jealousy
Develops into Depression.
Disgust and Disappointment
Feed off of Fear.
Humiliation is Hushed.
Reason? Rejection.
Embodied with Emptiness,
Confounded and Confused.
Happiness Hardened,
Heart Helpless



This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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BrokenSoul5 said...
today at 4:28 pm:
I agree with Denetria, it was a little too much alliteration but I did like the meaning of it.
 
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far.from.you.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 6:12 pm:
wow(: that was awesome.
 
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lil' push-up peach said...
May 20, 2010 at 9:47 pm:
I must say that this poem has a wonderful concept behind it. I just think that you might have been able to write it a little better....
 
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demetria said...
May 20, 2010 at 7:10 pm:
too much alliteration but really good concept though.
 
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XxBnThrRckedThtxX said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 11:17 pm:
I like how true this is. :)
I don't know if I should be putting a smilie next to that statement, but whatever. It was good. *thumbs up*
Simple, yet meaningful.
 
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