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Piercing Silence

September 27, 2009
By Veritytrue SILVER, LaVista, Nebraska
Veritytrue SILVER, LaVista, Nebraska
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Alone in the quiet stillness
Waiting for the smallest sound
Singing to fill the ringing
Of the silence that presses in on me from every direction
Threatening to suffocate
No one to witness
But the face in the mirror
Eyes closed, I become the quiet
One with the shadows in the hall
That leap and quiver in my moments of restlessness
I am nothing
But the silence piercing the empty night
Close your eyes and listen


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on Dec. 13 2013 at 1:22 am
zoeeverett SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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I haven't been on this site in a long time, saw your comments on my work and I got chills. This is such a timeless piece. line 3 is my favorite

on Oct. 15 2009 at 5:08 pm
Veritytrue SILVER, LaVista, Nebraska
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Thanks for commenting!

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 3:57 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;She walks in beauty,<br /> Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;<br /> And all that&#039;s best of dark and bright<br /> Meet in her aspect and her eyes.&quot;<br /> --Byron

MY favorite part is the part about leaping and quivering, very nice

on Oct. 14 2009 at 11:16 pm
Veritytrue SILVER, LaVista, Nebraska
6 articles 0 photos 53 comments
Thanks so much! Your poem was amazing too! Thanks for taking the time to comment!

LRachel BRONZE said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 4:29 pm
LRachel BRONZE, Holmdel, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&quot;

Thank you for commenting on my poem....Yours is amazing! I love it. I really love it.