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My Thunderstorm

November 10, 2009
By Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun&quot; -The Killers (Read My Mind)<br /> <br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t know where you&#039;re going, any road will take you there.&quot; -George Harrison

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The rain washes away my tears
I smile at the purple velvet skies
that are streaked with lightning
The rumbling thunder sounds like laughter
Is it laughing at me?

The sky cries with me,
It's own warm tears drenching me
I lay back in the grass, close my eyes and breath in the smell
This is my Thunderstorm

The violent winds whip my hair into my face
I smile and lay there while the sky darkens
There is no rainbow to be found here
But this is my rainbow

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This is something i wrote from experience. Thanks for reading!!
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CatyB BRONZE said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 9:20 pm
CatyB BRONZE, Waverly, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;...I&#039;ve always been proud of you...&quot; James Ford (my dad)<br /> &ldquo;&hellip;And no matter what anybody said I had a dream and I had something that mattered to me. So that&rsquo;s really what got me through it all&hellip;&rdquo; Deborah Ann Woll<br /> Ever just the same<br /> Ever a surprise<br /> Ever as before<br /> Ever just as sure<br /> As the sun will rise.<br /> Tale as old as time<br /> Tune as old as song<br /> Bittersweet and strange<br /> Finding you can change<br /> Learning you were wrong.<br /> Certain as the sun<br /> Rising in the east<br /> Tale as old as time<br /> Song as old as rhyme<br /> Beauty and the Beast.

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I really adored this, you have an amazing talent =)
chelliex65 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 9:01 pm
chelliex65 BRONZE, Farmingville, New York
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Aww, I liked this. You're a really good writer. :)
Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:22 pm
thank in you!!! =)
TemptedFiction said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:16 pm
TemptedFiction, Grayson, Georgia
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A hard part in life is pushing yourself to perfection. Whats even harder is realizing that it&#039;s an impossible goal to reach. -created by me-

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Ohmgeee Fredddd :)

This poem is really good. I like how you took something that most people dont like, and mad it into your own. Your thunderstorm. Really good job :D
Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 6:55 pm
*dances too* THANKS!!
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 6:52 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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i love this freddio! :D it's amazing. *dances* go fred go fred. lol.
Fredwardness SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 6:56 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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&quot;The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun&quot; -The Killers (Read My Mind)<br /> <br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t know where you&#039;re going, any road will take you there.&quot; -George Harrison

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yea you can callme freddi, and i will look at your work =)
writerscramp PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:41 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Anyone who says winning isn&#039;t everything,<br /> Has won nothing.<br /> ``Mia Hamm

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Aw, freddi! (is it ok that i call you that?) i honestly think this is my fav i've read for a while! (hence the reason why i presssed 'fav')

please read some of mine, your feedback would mean a lot!
Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 12:16 pm
oops the last line is supposed to be

But this is my thunderstorm