The river rushes as it
gently brushes the
rocks that lie below.
This is bait that
gently wakes in the
water while it flows.
gently brushes the
rocks that lie below.
This is bait that
gently wakes in the
water while it flows.
The River
(=amanda=)i like this =) maybe you could do a few more stanzas? idk..but all in all, great poem =)
Powd3erThis poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
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I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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