Her face.
Her face had no eyes, no nose, and no chin to hold her face up.
But she did have a mouth and a tongue.
Her face had no eyes, no nose, and no chin to hold her face up.
But she did have a mouth and a tongue.
The Destuctive force
DisortientedIdentityI really like the simplicity in this poem, yet it's so complex at the same time. Well done.
Kay4theRosesits simple and that lets everyone who reads this relate with their own issues and exsperiences. i really like it.
FlamableFyre
Nikole.347.nice, nice, nice. i like how you battle the harshness of words by using so few. i hate poetry that tries to spell out its meaning and you left this one pretty simple and abstract. so good job.
Alissa M. Thank you so much, and I know what you mean. I try to make all my stuff as simple but meaningful at the same as possible.
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