Yours

Like my heart
it is hard and cold,
beautiful,
it throws
rainbows in the light,
it stands still, as
my heart it is
also yours.

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deathonapedestal101 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 8:13 pm:

i love it, its short, its simple, but it says so much!

PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 8:24 pm :

This aint no lie!!! wonderful!

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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:52 pm:

Haha I agree with roseann. Cool beans, man! Serioulsy wicked emotion I always like poems that are short and sweet but still get the point across very effectively. I like it! :)

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roseann said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 7:20 am:

cool beans!

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carolines said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 8:59 pm:

at first, it sounds simple...
then when you think about it, it is the exact opposite. Everything one may be feeling is put into this complex little poem.
I love the way you write!
great job!

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