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In just one minute,
We could end up laughing at my stupid action.
In just one minute,
We could be talking about your crazy teachers.
In just one minute,
You could comfort me when I would cry.
In just one mintute,
I could give you a smile, and it would brighten your entire day.

There are a lot of things I could name that we could do
But in just one minute,
You crossed that bridge and my stupid self tore it down.
In just one week,
We wouldn't talk anymore
In just one day,
You couldn't look at me anymore
In just one hour,
I could be thinking about what caused us to grow apart
In just one minute,
I could say "I love you."
But in just one second,
You could rip out my heart and shred it into crushed pieces.




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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 8:57 pm:
i love this!!!
 
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JustMe said...
May 10, 2010 at 6:11 pm:
It was Pretty good.An Overall nice poem.
 
Ridelova101 replied...
May 10, 2010 at 6:39 pm :
Thanks and I really do like your story sorry if I seemed a bit...snooty or mean(couldn't quite find the right word for it)
 
Justme replied...
May 15, 2010 at 1:45 pm :

lol no, its fine :) Any feedback is good :)

 

 
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Milo! said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 4:13 pm:
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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caughtinaxm0ment said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 11:49 pm:
I love this (:
Especially the last few lines !
 
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