It's Funny

By DallysGrrl, Middlesex, NJ

It's funny how
Three sentences
Can tear two people
Apart.
It's funny how
Just a few words
Could break a poor girl's
Heart.
It's painful how
Just one small lie
Can split a heart
In two.
And it's painful how
Just two more words
Could mend it back
Like glue.

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sunnyhunny said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 5:30 pm:

I like this a lot. You were able to say so much in such few words. Great job.

DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 8:14 pm :

Thnx so much!!

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roxawesomeness said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 9:07 am:

i luv this. simple, short, awesome, keep on keeping on

DallysGrrl replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:41 pm :

Thanks so much so glad most people r liking it!!

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SammyG said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 3:20 pm:

this is so good, simple and cute :)

DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 9:10 pm :

Thnx so much!!

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dominicana said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 8:02 pm:

This is AMAZING check out my stuff also keep on writng

DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 11:52 am :

Thnx so much n i will.

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This*Lit*Is*Bananas said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 2:43 pm:

I like this...simple, cute, but sad. Yes, I think eating tubs of ice cream is the best therapy 2! :)
P.S. You like Glee? I LOVE Glee!!! :D

DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 3:02 pm :

ha thnx 4 the comment, n yeah, i luv glee.