And deep within there hung what was once a raw but uncommon sense of perception. And now in it resides an ugly promise of sunshine.
hmmm, took a while for me to figure this one out and to me it feels like it's lacking but then again you can let 100 ppl read the same poem and get different results
NiftygrrlThis is talent.I love this. Im going to check out more of your stuff.
Boosflash
I guess youre right. so what if the sun doesnt come up. who needs daylight anyway. this is very nice. youre a creative little guy(or girl, whatever). 5 stars.
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