love.

By mkgirl395, Coppell, TX

love is about two, and the one they will become.

love can be strong without lasting long.

love washes away sorrow, but leaves behind pain.

love tears at the heart, and leaves a stain.

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amazingkp. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:54 am:

That is really good! I like it a lot. Check out some of my writings i think you will like them. (And comment if you like.) Keep writing!

Egyptiangirl13 replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 10:54 am :

THis is really good!!! i like it!!! please check out some of my work!!! :)

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xXsmileXx said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 5:46 pm:

i really like this. I mean honestly when i saw the title i thought to myself, oh gosh another sappy love poem. But when i read it i was really surprised and thoroughly enjoyed it. you say so much with so little words. Amazinggg job. two thumbs up!! =]

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Shecklergrl13 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 5:44 pm:

Agreed :) i love the first line

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thewriteidea said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 9:01 pm:

Wow this is really good! My favorite line is the first one. That left an impression on me. Way to put all your emotions into such simple words and phrases that mean so much. Great job! Check out some of my work if you'd like. Keep writing!