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March 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Hidden in the darkness
Heart as cold as ice
Waiting for a hero
Everything has its price

Rejected by society
Victim of their hate
Far beyond their mercy
Kindness comes too late

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:44 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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thank you very much everyone:)
yes_i_am SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 7:38 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;not all those who wander are lost&quot;

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u r lethal with words...very simple but soulful poetry..which is the way  it should be
PrincessPineapple GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 8:07 pm
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
18 articles 0 photos 46 comments

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&quot;To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten.&quot; ~unknown

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this is good!
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:27 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

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&quot;You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo.&quot;~ Lauren Lopez in Starship<br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t die for something, I&#039;ll kill you for nothing.&quot;~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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So true. WE let others slip past our grasp drowning in their sorrow, dying by their hurt.
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on May. 31 2010 at 8:24 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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thanks everyone:)                      
KosuKovu13 SILVER said...
on May. 31 2010 at 7:44 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
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&quot;Tormented by the demon of literature.&quot; ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

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It definitely desribes the point of view as being the "victim" of any situation. Very good, very detailed. I like it.
JoetheBlanc GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 9:32 am
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

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&quot;the shadow proves the sunshine!&quot;

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wow. very amazing. you are definitely a wordsmith! 
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 7:14 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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thank you:)                                            
JacobC GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:28 am
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
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&quot;Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no.&quot; -Anonymous

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Once again, great job.  I like your style.
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:22 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thank you:)
Trolllollo said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 9:47 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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I love this poem its amazing great work!!
LostAngel DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 12:46 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Just live your life, if people don&#039;t like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it&quot; &quot;if you can&#039;t stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best&quot;

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again, I love love love itttt