The sun is so bright it light's up the night, big bold and yellow its like a friendly fellow. It shimmers down upon me waiting anxiously, for night to come once again so i can pray for thee. As I sleep at night, I dreem about the sun. Oh how it makes me feel, like i want to have fun. Waking up once again, I ran out fast to see. The sun was out in the sky, staring back at me.
The Sun
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