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Lies.

July 20, 2010
By wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.


She always falls so hard,
Her eyes remained closed.
The boy never catches her,
Its always candid, never posed.


Her heart is real,
And her feelings true.
She continues to get walked on,
Its something she forgets but always knew.


Amiable and optimistic,
She has set goals.
She wants to go far in life,
She fights with all her soul.


Broken promises,
And words left unspoken.
These are the things,
That leave the wounds so open.


A smile is there,
To conceal the pain.
The boy who played her,
Thought it was one big game.


He told lies,
And made her be[lie]ve.
He conceived many promises,
This girl was anything but relieved.


A promise of forever,
A ring on her finger.
He lead her on,
And left the pain to linger.


She had so much to offer,
So much love to give.
She wasn't good enough for him,
This is the one mistake he will soon have to live.


He never knew,
What was right in front of him.
Its like the lights went down,
And everything went dim.


She couldn't offer him sex,
So he went off to find it else where.
The pain is just to much,
And he doesn't even care.


I know how it feels Young Girl,
To not be wanted.
Hes permanently on your mind,
Its the memories that are haunted.


I'm tired of boys,
Thinking with the wrong head.
They need to grow up and mature,
And be a man instead.


I finally got closure,
But its not the answer I wanted to hear.
I wanted him to love me,
I wanted him to reappear.


I know now,
God has someone better planned for me.
A real man,
Who knows exactly what he wants to be.


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wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 9:35 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Thank you so much!

i really hope the things i went through can touch people. Thank you so much. <3 


on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:13 pm
stephiigiirl BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I - I took the one less travelled by, And that has made all the difference.<br /> - Robert Frost <br /> <br /> Beauty is unbearable, drives us to despair, offering us for a minute the glimpse of an eternity that we should like to stretch out over the whole of time.<br /> - Albert Camus

this is beautiful, my feelings almost exactly

"Hes permanently on your mind,
Its the memories that are haunted."

i give you 5stars, this moved me so much.

check out some of my work =]


on Jul. 25 2010 at 4:01 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
2 articles 4 photos 75 comments
Wow, this really moved me. Amazing job. 5 stars,(:

asocialcat said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 2:51 pm
asocialcat, Sarasota, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

This is beautiful. I truly love it.

One grammatical point to address: "its" is a possessive adjective whereas "it's" is the contraction of "it is". This is a common mistake. Keep this rule in mind when you are writing your poems.


on Jul. 25 2010 at 1:13 pm
SoftballPoet PLATINUM, Branson, Missouri
26 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is like a rubber band. When one person lets go, it hurts the other person who is still holding on.&quot;

that was very good.

on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:15 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I cannot live without books.&quot; - Thomas Jefferson

very good and true

on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:12 pm
LadyMoon DIAMOND, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
54 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m so weird I&#039;m normal<br /> -Khalil, a friend

OMFG!!!this poem is amazing....I loved it!I kinda went through a tough relationship myself recently and this poem really speaks to me.Thanx :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 9:52 pm
datrumpeter PLATINUM, Jefferson City, Missouri
40 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Before you insult someone, walk a mile in their shoes. that way, when you insult them, you&#039;ll be a mile away from them and you&#039;ll have their shoes.&#039;

loved it! your capturing a lot of girl's hearts with thoughts and emotions we couldn't put into words ourselves!

Sencere BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 6:25 pm
Sencere BRONZE, Annapolis, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why am I fighting to live, when I&#039;m just living to fight. Why am I trying to see when there ain&#039;t nothing in sight. Why am I trying to give when no one gives me a try. Why am I dying to live, when I&#039;m just living to die.

love it 5 stars

alicia16 said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:31 pm
alicia16, Waldorf, Maryland
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The happist memory are ones i have yet to create - Ellen Hapkins.

amazing it was wonderful i loved it very well written

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:24 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities.&quot; -- Albus Dumbledore

This is really, really good!  It's flowy and beautiful but to the point at the same time.  I love it :)

Trebled SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 11:57 pm
Trebled SILVER, Gladstone, Other
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you imagine is real.&quot; - Pablo Picasso

This is so raw and true. Thank you for sharing! <3

on Jul. 22 2010 at 11:55 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

I love it!!! its so amazing and paints such a pic in my head!!  if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:46 pm
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER, Excelsior Springs, Missouri
7 articles 3 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its going to hurt, before it feels better. Trust me.. Its worth it.

ohmygosh, this is absolutely positively wonderful. Definately 'fav' ing it. :D

You seem to be a wonderful writer. Please check out/cmnt/rate my work. thanks


on Jul. 22 2010 at 9:05 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

This is beautifully conceived. Very powerful and breath taking. So many people can relate to this. Definitely deserves the top 4. Your amazing i am so inspired, this is going on my favorites. (: Congrats on great work.

on Jul. 22 2010 at 8:17 pm
lily_says_rawr GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
13 articles 0 photos 11 comments
This is really good and so absolutely true. I definitely think that your poem has a chance to be on the top 4 list sometime soon. :)