Bad Aim

Its beautiful :)

you managed to capture so much meaning in such few words. I've thought about things like these millions of times but have never been able to get it down on paper. Ver very nice work :)

God...what a eye opener!!! You might really think this is really a random thought of yours. I think you've made a very profound judge from the popular saying. I agree with you, and I also think it is genius by putting it in a poetry format. Suc point like this would most likely be elaborated fully in essays and articles, It is stunning and unbelievable to see a poet like you making poetry very useful by brainstorming it originally in such a way that all the points is said fully in a short sta... (more »)