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My hands are flying,
Faster than the speed of light
Producing a tune that is natural,
That is self learned, unable to be taught.

There is no judgment.
No sight involved.
There is no wrong key or chord to hit,
For this piece is mine,
only mine will it be.

A song will be sung without a mouth,
The crescendo will collect to the brim.
The tension will grow ever so slightly.
still the melody will carry on.

I stumble on the bridge to a new passage
That will conclude the show for the night,

Yet I will pursue the finish,
As if there ever was one,
Till all that remains is the piano and myself
Till I have let myself be heard.




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Devon B. said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 11:14 pm:
Wow!! I am a musician as well (cello, violin, guitar, bass) and feel the same way. Music is my main inspirartion, but I definitely dont have the writing skills to express it the way you do. Great job
 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 7:48 am :

wow... ur really talented... i only play violin and piano, but u play like 4 instruments!! i've always wanted to learn guitar..

thanks for reading :D <3

 
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The_Infernal_Poet said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 7:42 pm:
This is really good, I like it, I play trumpet and I just love music period. This is awesome.
 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 7:47 am :
thank you! :D <3
 
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mimirocks124 said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 3:45 pm:
i can relly relate. i play the flute&piccolo in my skool marching band symphonic band & possibly jazz band too. <3 i luv the insperation
 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 7:17 am :

so you understand the feeling... :)

thanks for reading....

i have a question... does anybody know how to vote articles #1? im new to teenink and i couldn't figure it out...

 
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elmosoreo said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 10:10 am:
OH!!! Absolutely LOOOVE :) I'm a music person (gunna be a music teacher ^.^) and I play clarinet this was GREATTTTT!!!! :) btw what brand is ur violin I need one...and can't find a set brand everyone likes :) lol start a forum and tell me? lols ^.^
 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 1:39 pm :
Thanks!!! another music geek yay!!! um.... my violin isn't like a great brand. its okay. i don't like go after brands and stuff, i just work on sound so im the wrong person to ask. the only thing i can tell u is that u shouldn't get a dominant "E" string.. it'll make ur sound way too sharp and rough..  hope that helped :)
 
elmosoreo replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 1:14 pm :
HaHa I def know what you mean. I wasnt meaning a set brand but I get the E string thing :)
 
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Amiee said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 12:04 am:

wow!

i play the piano too and i feel the same way (sometimes ^^)!!!!! this is sooo good!!! :

 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 1:40 pm :

thank you! :D

check out my other stuff.. they aren't about music.. but hey.. why not?

thanks again :)

 
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WhiteShadows said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 10:23 pm:
Very well done!! I like that
 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 1:40 pm :
Thank you :) ! <3
 
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hold.me.still..899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 9:25 pm:
there is beautiful passion in this. :) good job!!
 
Tingaree replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 1:41 pm :
wow thanks :D
 
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