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Holding Back

silent anger, i hold back
out of reach, i keep you distant
i smile so you think I'm okay
never saying what i want to say
holding back, with tear filled eyes
i never show you the tears i cry
but you've always sensed my demise
you brush me off like a piece of lint
hoping one day I'll feel content
i don't tell you whats wrong
because you never ask
you look right through me like a piece of glass
holding back, this breath is my last




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ChuggaTrain.41 said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 10:03 am:
That. Is. Amazing. It truely is. I loved it.(:
 
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kay said...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 5:16 pm:
love it!                                                                  
 
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Raytheraym said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 4:35 pm:
Wow, very good! Filled to the brim with emotion! I like it.
 
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TwinDemons said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 7:38 pm:
Good Job! This is really deep. I do the same with me poems. I find that I really like your poety.
 
AlyBug replied...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 8:48 pm :

thanx :)

 

 
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HighOnEverythingButLove said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 5:51 pm:
This poem show so much emotion it amazing. I hide my feelings all the time behind a fake smile. I know what ur trying to say in this poem.
 
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flywithme899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 7:25 pm:
ooh, this is really deep... i like it! well then, i really hope ur not suicidal... but anyway, good job!! its real relatable
 
AlyBug replied...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 7:51 pm :
lol no m not i just bury everything inside and let in flow in my poems
 
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