My Dyeing Love for You

This is my heart please keep it safe
In a special spot with some empty space
You’re my love always and for ever
I think about you day and night
And my heart is sad when you’re not by my side
This is for you; you truly are my true love

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Muzee3 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:27 am:

U cant both get together... u've got the talent!! LOL

POET_MAN16 replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 3:42 am :

lol i kno i do but i want the girl to

Muzee3 replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 5:45 am :

Hey am so sorry.... I had bymstakly added 'T' to can... LOL..... Don't worry.... BTW, can u comment/rate on mine too?

Sabee replied...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 3:10 am :

shocked really shocked

POET_MAN16 replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 12:44 am :

y r u shoked

Sabee replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 2:01 am :

Because i feel it that way and when i read it i was shocked

Muzee3 replied...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 3:18 am :

things lyk tht happen. anywy calm down now. :P

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Brokenness_is_Beautiful said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:27 pm:

Awww...I'm almost to tears!!! I might just have to marry you! jk...anyways have you tried giving her one of your poems? they are really great!

POET_MAN16 replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:55 am :

yes i already gave her one and it worked :) poeams are just amazing beautiful pices of art that i love

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POET_MAN16 said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 7:59 am:

plz comment