The Same Sky

Simple, but I really like this! It reminds me of when you travel somewhere new and think about what people are doing back home.

I read this a few times, it's not loaded with a lot of words. It still holds a bit of meaning though :)!

Very good!

 

I'm not sure why you broke the stanzas up like you did. If it was for emphasis, how about you add a period after "by," and capitalize "and"?

 

Also, I would suggest "just where" and "looking up." I think it places a tad more emphasis, and the extra syllables help to close it out. Honesty, the first time I read it, I added those words subconsciously.

 

Keep it up!

I like the idea, its a nice thought. [:

It's called Destiny :)

Very good. Well written.

I love this. I often think the same exact thing. How everyone is different, yet we gaze at the same moon every night. It makes you feel a connection with every person on all continents of the Earth. It's a beautiful thing. What would happen if our world were like other planets that had several moons, and people in different parts of the world looked at a different moon? That would be weird! Just a thought! Good job!

I feel this way too about a certain someone. Only thing is, we don't live in the same city! (That's going to change, though!)

I like this poem a lot! So short and simple, yet it says so much :)

That's crazy! How people are so far away from each other but yet they share the sky.

I love this poem because I can relate.

5/5*

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