Mirrors
A reminder of what
I am
a fat
ugly
pimpled nose
greasy haired
imperfectly perfect
teenager
A reminder of what
I am
a fat
ugly
pimpled nose
greasy haired
imperfectly perfect
teenager
Ha-5-rikaIt is a really wonderful piece of work. Short, simple, but meaningful. I like the phrase, "imperfectly perfect". Good job.
thank u i don't think this is my strongest pieces though :P
Vicky11So very true :) Yet, is that really what you see as you? I mean, all that stuff will go away, so I really doubt that you should think of yourself as that. How about a good poet? :)
MystiecubHeh...ironically enough this is how I see MYSELF. Not really much I can say because the greasy-haired part is true :P (my hair doesnt like to stay soft even after I wash it like twice in one day sometimes its quite annoying)
i've tried everything to make the greasy hair go away i may have founs somehting though
ttlove21Good but YOU are NOT i love you the way you are!!!!!
Alon_FreevoiceThis poem is good. Nice one.
CarrieAnn13
A great emotional poem!
When I look in the mirror, I often see myself the same way. But thinking of yourself like that is the perfect way to go insane. You shouldn't compare yourself to others because you are unique and to quote that song "you were born this way."
DelictiousEveryone has felt that way one time in their life, but you have to just be true to yourself and realize that everyone is beautiful in their own way!
haha "I'm beautiful in my way cuz god makes no mistakes i'm on the right track baby i was born this way don't hide yourself in regret just love urself and your set" I love that song and I'm taking care of what i said bout myself
redhairCat
I can see that you feel insecure. I really like the line "imperfectly perfect". Hey, be yourself and enjoy it!
I always am myself my family doesn't think so though.. anyways thanks and i'm taking care of things that i said about myself
ElleNicoleThis is good. =) It's short, but I'm able to see the vulnerability in this. It was brought out well. Nice work!
Would you mind giving me feedback on my poem? Thanks if you do!
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