Right now as I think of you, I can nearly feel your touch. Even though I'm here and you're there, I can almost feel you laying right next to me; your strong arms holding me closely and tightly. As I think of my head resting on your chest, I can almost feel your heart beating...I can almost feel your touch. I can nearly hear you breathe. I can almost feel your lips just barely touching mine! As I dream of running my fingers through your hair my heart beats fast. Just then, when I think my dream is over, I take a deep breath and it begins again.
Annabelle294I absolutely love this, and it is so easy for anyone to relate to who has been through this
Thank you. That really was my main point and goal when I wrote this because I have been thru a few LDRs and am currently in one again right now. I'm very glad u enjoyed it.
God bless,
Joy
AllysonMarieI dont know what too say besides... I LOVED IT (: . It truley was a great poem, I could feel the mood and almost feel myself being the charecter from the brilliant use of the discripive word. However, Just try too make it with stanzas. I mean, Its great and that dosent bother me at all! I just have a feeling some others mite say the same! Never give up on poetry, your amazing!
Thank you so much! Please check out some of my other poems as well:)
God bless,
Joy
Bambi67
very nice,like it. check out my work =)
DreamsAreBroken said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:55 pm:
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:55 pm:
Cute and relateable. You hit all the right feelings in just the right way
Thanks so much! I really love to hear feedback from people who read my work:)
God bless,
Joy
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