Forever Friends

It's cute and i like it! Especially the "lost the upside down days" and "Nostalgia driven daze/wishing to be back there/the summer that was us"

This is really sweet :) I like how you're showing w literal examples rather than telling. The only part I would consider changing is the "gone but not forgotten" - yes, it gets your sentiment across exactly but it's also a cliche, used over and over, I think people also use it to talk about dead people. Not what you want, right? So I'd definitely re-word that, just using synonyms. You could even do, always remembered, still there, etc. Other than that, really relatable and sweet poem. I've defin... (more »)

Nostalgia-driven daze
I love that! <3

Nostalgia-driven daze
<3 I love that.

nice job. very good imagery. not really my personal kind of thing, but I still liked it!

Kind of reminds me of a friend I used to have... except the pickles. Lol oddly we both hated pickles. Nice poem! And I love the repetition of "Gone but not forgotten" maybe add that as a last line? Great job and keep writing! :D

i enjoyed it...reflecting on memories is what keeps the memories in place where they are never forgotten...I miss my grandma and family memebers that i have recently lost but remembering the things we use to do keeps them close :)

 

Song lyrics! They sing naturally. 

This is cute. (Sorry to describe it in the same way as the others, but that is just the right word! :D) i would capitalize the "us". Great writing. It is fresh (if you know what i mean)!

aww this is cute

Oh cute! It's like a memory for you right? It reminds me of my best friend. Good flow and good imagery. I liked it :)