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When I awake in the morning your on my mind.

When I eat I imagine you sweeping me off my feet.

When I get ready to slumber you keep me up for hours.

When I finally drift off into the dream land you’re there reaching out for my hand.

I love you my darling I can’t wait to see you in person.



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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 8:39 pm:
Reading the first four lines, my mind said to me tediously "another tiresome poem about perfect love and senseless adoration." Pleasant, but common. Then, I read that last line and- aha! There was the cleverness and the ending which gave depth to the beginning and the middle. Cleverly done, BlackRose, cleverly done.
 
savetheplanetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 9:00 pm :
Indeed, I love this poem as well.  I can relate to this not because I'm in love with someone, but that I count the seconds til I see my best friends again.
 
BlackRose...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:55 pm :
aw well thanks ^.^ 
 
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