You left the imprint of your lips on my heart and your love tied along with it. Forever they and that moment will remain untouched, not able to be replaced, protected just as equal as the organ that lies in my chest pumping blood throughout my body to keep me alive. My first kiss, forever preserved.
glimmerThis poem was short and sweet! I really liked how you compared it to "the organ that lies in my chest"! Great imagery:)
thetruthawaits94
I like this! It has a really cool idea. Truly beautiful. I love how you say that memory will be forever preserved. :) Good writing!!! Send some more stuff in! Mind reading something of mine? Just check my page out!
Thanks alot for your thoughts =]
Ill be sure to check out your work..!
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