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make a wish,
it can be for anything,
mine was to be happy,
I found you,
there's a shooting star,
i wish for you never to stray too far,
there's birthday candles,another one,
I wish for our love to never be done,
genie brings three more,
I wish I'm the one you adore,
I wish you'll never walk out that door,
I wish to you I'll never be a bore,
you tell me you don't need the wishes,
you've found all you need in me,
when ever you miss me,pretend to kiss me,
I'm as happy as can be,
just always be mine,
and life will be fine,




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JustAnotherOwlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 4:52 pm:
This is really cute! I really loved when you said "You tell me you don't need wishes...". I like this a lot, aside from one little itty bitty criticism: The line "I wish to you I'll never be a bore" seems forced, like you could probably write a better fitting line in place of it. Regardless, I really liked this! :)
 
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wordnerd54This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 2:18 pm:
This is such a sweet and simple poem! You described that feeling perfectly... how when you like someone you're so excited, and yet you almost don't believe it's true and wish that it won't end. Very nicely done. (And if you wanted to comment on any of my work, I wouldn't mind!)
 
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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 30, 2012 at 8:26 pm:
Cute! Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
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ByThisBlindingLightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 8:52 pm:
^^ AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW that was so sweet!!!! very cute
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 10:04 am :
I agree with BTBLight, this is SO cute. I love it, it's one of those works that just makes you smile!
 
julywinters1226This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:09 pm :
thanks both of you.:)
 
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