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Sweet Scrub MAG
April 19, 2008
Her smooth fingers
Coat a car windshield
With sun-kissed cream.
Dipped in butter soap,
Sponges soak up dirt,
Reveal the lost glimmer.
She sprays hose-water
Like an April shower,
Onto the glossy hood.
Her shiny reflection
Meanders in droplets
Down metallic doors.
Froth tickles her toes
As a bubble of delight
Escapes from pink lips;
It frolics with soapsuds,
Dancing to the melody
Of her sweet laughter.
© Anonymous
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This article has 83 comments.
farmergirl28621 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 7:01 pm
I really, really like the imagery of the poem. It is simple but it paints such a pretty picture in one's head.
SarahJumps SILVER said...
on May. 18 2010 at 9:34 pm
I LOVE the last four lines in this. so beautifully written.
awesomeman123 SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 11:48 pm
Wow. very blissful. i can't help but smiling :)
decembersun14 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:53 am
so sweet and moving! i loved it! your similes were awesome and your choice of words was amazing!
Alexis7674 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 11:04 am
Very discreptive I loved it
ChristianCowgirlCC SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 9:48 pm
Aww! That was so "bubbly". And fun. I loved it. (:
summer-baby said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:46 am
i really enjoyed reading this poem. it was really cute.
CHEERLEADER~4~life BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:06 am
this is a really well writen poem...
i really enjoyed reading it....keep it up!
=]
i really enjoyed reading it....keep it up!
=]
sansan said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:33 am
so i realy happy for that poeme u just give it to me and i thank's u for that thank u so much.
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 6:22 pm
how cute, very good
matthewZ said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 8:03 pm
nice! look at my poem too plz? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/156195/Airplanes/ rate and comment plz! thanks a million!
CaptainFabulous. GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 3:57 pm
i really like this
love the details!
keep writing
love the details!
keep writing
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