Butterflies

Wow! I love this! It's incredible! Fantastic job!!! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot:) Thanks!

Proabably not the right word to use but i'm  going to say it anyway:

This poem is so cute! And I love it

haha great job!

I absolutely adore this poem! I can tell you have a lot of talent! Keep writing!

Ahh yes! Writing about writing is a remarkable art isn't it? Usually the only thing I can think of!

True; not if they get away though! :) Thanks for your comments, everyone. I love receiving new feedback! :)

Perfect metaphor- and the last two lines are so true.

Interesting metaphor But I think thoughts can be MADE into something beautiful too :)

This is beautiful and absolutely amazing! I love it! Would you check out my stuff???

The figuritive language and double meaning helped to make this poem special but the last line was perfect.

What a pretty poem!

Thanks to everyone who commented. I really appreciate it.

Would LOVE some more feedback on this poem and my others! :)

this is so very good, good job of interpreting your feelings

It seems like today many people use butterflies almost synonymously with bright, happy, and hopeful. I like, though, how you've used them to mean something more down to earth and realistic: Something intriguing, beautiful, but difficult to catch and always just out of reach. It's a short poem, but very effective and packs a lot of wollop for a little package. And how true it is that the best ones always seem to get away. Keep writing! (You're good at it.)

Do you know how many poems there are describing the writing process?  Zillions.  Do you know which one I felt was the most true?  This one.  Beautiful.  People often overuse and abuse butterflies in figurative language, but you made them work very well.