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no one told me how hard it would be
Seeing everyone with their loved ones
making me feel left out
tears rushing down my face like rain rushing down the window
I just wanna run from my fears and problems
Trying to erase all the memories from what I once had
needing friends more then ever
trying to find a soul mate to help me feel better
Always having a close friend near is a good idea
But now the friend is gone so I feel empty
running into my ex brings back the good memories
trying to find things to get my mind off the break up but some things make it worse
First year we were officially dating
people questioned us and tried to make us a better couple then we were
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You did a great job. I think you could possibly work on making the poem flow a bit more smoothly, but I did like the chopiness of it. Ironing out a few bumps would really do a lot. Other then that, you did an amazing job! Keep writing! :)
If you have a spare second, I'd love it if you would take a check out and rate/comment on some of my work.
Okay, I have a bit of criticism.
1. '...needing friends more then ever..." 'then' should be 'than' because you're comparing something.
2. This is just a pet peeve of mine, but you really should capitalize the first letter of all the important words in your title.
Other than those minor things, I think this is a great poem! Good work!
