Which reminds me of you

By LizzyChuma, Follansbee, WV

Sadly but true,
I am still in love with you.
This feeling won't go away,
It is stubborn and chose to stay.

Which vividly reminds me of you.

Just thinking of you
makes my face turn blue.
You take my breath away.
You leave me with nothing to say.

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Honewisacat said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 9:10 am:

I really like this. Try to use different wortds though, like when you said It makes my face turn blue. Try something different I think it would make it click better.

TakemyTears replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 5:10 pm :

I think it makes the simplicity just right but not too much in this poem, but i see what you're saying. even saying makes my heart turn blue.

Lizzalie95 replied...
Nov. 2, 2012 at 12:04 pm :

Okay, thank you :)