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Rain, rain

Never go away

I want you here

So I can run outside

To play

And splash

In the puddles

Till the dirt muddles

Our miniature lakes

And Look up to heaven

And catch raindrops




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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 9:41 am:
I like how you used the familiar 'rain rain go away' and changed it up! Very creative and nice ^_^
 
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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 3:10 pm:
It's simple..yet elegant and full of truth. LoVe It!1!
 
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Kiki_McGeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 1:45 pm:
Whoo rain! Rain is amazing, especially thunderstorms. Anyways, I love how you modeled this off the old classic ("Rain, Rain Go Away") and then put your own twist on it.
 
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TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakes said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 3:03 pm:
Woot! A poem about wanting the rain to continue! FINALLY! :D I hate songs about rain having to go away. anyways, the poem is cute, light, and has a sense of innocence to it. I like it. :D
 
EtherealThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 5:42 am :
thank you!
 
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Feb. 16, 2012 at 3:33 pm :
I agree, it's very cute!
 
loveissmilesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 7:19 am :

simple, elegant, innocent, lovely.

I really like this, although it's not my style. But don't take that as me saying i don't like it, because i do, it's just most of the stuff i write is sad and morbid, because poetry is a release for me.

What i'm trying to say is that even though i would never write this, and it's not my style, i like it.

 
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