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Beneth my feet

I will watch you from a distance no longer scared,
I will stand tall while you try to make me fall,
I will stand free and tall while your beneath my feet.
You'll say things and I won't lie I mat sway but they'll be there to keep me up.
My eyes may be flowing now but when the time comes I will be stronger.
Happy now? You've seen me fall, but wait when your beneath my feet, I will be there proud and tall.
I'll be there big and tall while you fall.




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savetheplanetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 28, 2012 at 7:17 pm:
The concept is good, but I would encourage you to do more in depth with this poem.  It's obviously inspired by some highly personal emotions that aren't being conveyed strongly in the poem.  Keep working! :)
 
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