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How can i fly,
when the world holds me down
When all of this violence,
threatens to drown
the hope of my people
the earth that i love
How can i fly,
When there is no above?



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selina said...
May 10, 2012 at 9:59 pm:
i loved it
 
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life.is.charming said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 8:01 pm:
love thiss!!!! i think everybody at some point in their lives want to just break away and be free and just do whatever their hearts desire yet there is always something holding them back.. maybe even life itself. Great poem:)
 
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Allicat001This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 9:37 am:
Really good!
 
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DanielM. said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 7:34 pm:
Great Job !!! i really like it.
 
Alixchica66This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 7:37 pm :

haha, thank you for commenting daniel XD

 

 
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BrendanC said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 9:20 pm:
Knuckle... This was very good.  You are wrong sir
 
Alixchica66This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 7:35 pm :

thank you brendan! that means a lot to me :)

 

 
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GothicNightmare said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 9:17 pm:
This really IS emotional and is relatable to the desires we have to break away from the agony the earth throws at us.
 
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Dreamer7697This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 10:43 pm:

Hey friend, so this your friend dreamer! and I must say I like this ....Alot... Its simple but yet holds a beauty to what you express about us humans causing harm to the people we love. I applaud you !

 

 
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HateKnuckleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 12:33 am:
This doesn't seem to have too much emotion but it has rhyme(which I am partial to)and it has a good message and question. Its 3 stars.
 
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