Happy me

I think that this is a very unique piece. You should stay and say what you want and how you feel. I hope I see many more of these pieces because I feel you writing them because you put your emotion into them instead of any one else's. Don't be a bum at home write about a bum. Stand up for rights sit down and write. Thank you soooo much for showing me what kinds of writings there are in different peoples mind. Rember keeeeeep writing. Hope you will be famous one day. I say Write On don't Sit Down... (more »)

your poem is

too general

you should explain deeper in every line.

Express your feelings even more.