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Innocent's Price

Innocence free
To blissfully fly
The blue of her wings
That melt with the sky
The green eyes of the kitten
Staring her way
That sparkle with wonder,
No more boredom today.

The wet, purple bloodstains
Where her wings are tearing,
The gray of his claws
That snatch with out caring.
Innocence gleefully
Bouncing around.
Innocence lying
Dead on the ground.




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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13 at 1:58 pm:
Ah...I love the theme and the rhyme. It's beautiful.
 
EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 14 at 9:43 pm :
Thank you! Haha, this is another one of my "what the heck am I getting into" poems about dating. I was having a very confusing time XD Oh well, poetry really is a great way to get out your fear, and all the joys of life as well.
 
SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 15 at 11:24 am :
WOW...Your poetry is so much more deep than I first thought...that there are so many multiple meaning for every line...just wow....And You're welcome!
 
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Josika.Nav said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 2:30 am:
wow! nice one!! i love the flow and the meaning. beautiful rhyme scheme :) great work and keep writing XD!
 
EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 4:30 pm :
Thank you!!!
 
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snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 11, 2012 at 8:56 pm:
Awesome job with the rhyming scheme; you had a successful rhyme pattern and also used very powerful imagery. That's a sign of a good writer. Keep it up!!!!
 
EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 4:40 pm :
Thanks for your comment! :D
 
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