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My spine stiffens,
My hair rises,
My body shivers,
As the monsters embrace me,
Trapping me in arms
That feel as cold as winter.

I tried to pulled myself away,
But invisible fingers
Closed around my limbs
And dragged me down the abyss,
Into that terrifyingly inescapable,
And endless darkness.




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KeepLivingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 25, 2012 at 2:00 pm:
This is written so well. It's so to the point and gripping, like a thriller novel that you just can't put down.
 
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teamo14 said...
May 12, 2012 at 11:31 am:
really interesting. :)
 
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Dreamer7697This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 10, 2012 at 10:10 pm:
Pretty good! You made your fear into beautiful written words! I don't mean to advertise but can you check my work out too? Thanks!
 
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snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 6:33 am:
I didn't quite understand the poem by the side note cleared it up. In saying that, I love your inspiration for this poem and the use of line breaks to augment the strength of it.
 
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TheCapturedBatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2012 at 9:08 am:
this is so immediate and intense it is hard to read. it is so beautifully written.
 
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