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My Dear,
does the breeze blow for us?
Turning turbines and giving sweaty children a memory?
Or does it blast in spite if us, ripping through our hearts as if
we are but a methanol crease on the pages of the records of its home?



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Basya44This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 8:37 pm:
Does the breeze blow for us? That's a very interesting question actually. Does nature exist for us? Would it stop if we were gone? Hmmm...You would love my poetry. I would be thrilled to hear your feedback. You are awesome.
 
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Jun. 6, 2012 at 9:22 pm :
Thanks again, Basaya. Your feedback is always appreciated!
 
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