i wanna sing,i wanna cry but i can't sing anymore because you are not here i can't cry so instead i smile,every day i thing of you and me & how we use hang,how in those Saturday nights we had a blast,now that you are not here i can't sing you know why i can't sing because i don't feel the need anymore my inspiration is gone,Hope you are Happy,Hope you feel great i hope that one day you say i'm sorry Mel'
BookWorm98
keep writing poetry what you may think is a bad piece may be salvation to others trust me
DedicatedDetermination
DanielMWell first of all nice job on trying something new. I'm not good at poetry either. Anyways it was good your message was really good. Suggestion: their a few issues with format. great first try
Thanks I know err I haven't try poetry that long but yeah :) umm thanks for the review :)
the inspiration for this poem was my friend melissa who got devastaded aftfer her last boyfriend broke up with her :)
mmm i'm not good at poems as you can see but i decide to give it a try so i'll apreciatte i you tell me what you think ....
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