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Oh those of you with a bleeding heart

How would you know what i have lost



Though i lament, i'm still incarnate

My tale of grief - still a blank slate



Your condolenses, oh, so lackadaisical

they are insatiable, infuriating me



My incadescent skin, i can't feel it now

because all i have, is in front of me:



The articulation of a holocaust

The bereavement i will always feel



Your blithe tenor can never incancerate it

The sight of the tyrannt in front of me



his covert credence so misleading

his countenance imbued with horrendous aims



his footsteps insiduous, filth dripping down his robes

laryngitis persists in me, i can speak no more



and then it blows off like cotton balls

blood spills on the floor, flesh tears up the walls



my blood seems curdled up in my veins

can't eliminate the insoluble grief that remains



emblazoned with deep red roses it is

the sight of the death bed electrocutes me



the irrevocable truth still unincontrovertible to me

lays bleeding on it, my late father's body



I return to my past, travel up the lanes

admist the abyss and negligible remains



I can still feel the love in the wind that blows

But oh, the source, is so now close



Oh, who will love me like he did before

Undisputable that is, there's anyone no more!




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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 6:53 pm:
You use a lot of large words. You seem very fluent in your speaking and use a lot of high-level vocabulary. I love the way you write!!
 
VelaneDeBeauteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 2:33 pm :
Haha Thank you! :)) I usually don't use think vocabulary but for this one, I thought really hard on the feelings and how to allocate the appropriate word for each one sensation. :) 
 
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