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Remember in elementary school
and our teachers stood in front of us with their broadening smiles
and their dreaded note cards
and they told us to take out our books and write in cursive...

Cursive
flowing cursive, one letter, after another, after another
they all line up like disciplined soldiers in single file
ready to move so fast and so furiously that they don't even have time to put on their hats...
No breathing! You can't breathe until the word ends...
Breathing's boring, don't bother breathing, just keep going...

But...
Maybe once in a while
we should stop.

Just stop,

To notice the engravings on the pavement
and the fine print beneath our shoes.

Maybe just once
we should
pause
and realize that the sky wasn't made just to rain.
It was made to breathe.




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Silhouettes said...
today at 5:02 pm:
:) I caught the Doctor Who refrence in there ;) 'breathing is broing' yay! It's awesome that you're a Whovian, too! I like the refrence to the words being like soldiers, I never thought about them being like that. P.S. Your profile pic. rocks!
 
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today at 7:51 pm :
Thanks for your comment and xD I love my profile pic too.  David Tennant is the best.  The breathing is boring thing is actually from Sherlock, isn't it?  At least that's what I thought.  But anyway, your comment reminded me of a poem I wrote about Doctor Who.  I'm going to upload it soon.  It's called Fury if you want to look for it when it's accepted by the moderators.    Again, thanks for your comment.  I'm happy you l... (more »)
 
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Jan. 23 at 7:56 pm:
It was nice but I was slightly mislead by the beginning. I thought it was going to be like a childhood memory, but then it turned to breathing so I'm not sure what the moral is, but it was good :)
 
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