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The sky is illuminated by the moon's light,
But it pales in comparison to your smile - so bright,
Your movements are graceful as that of a dove,
Put two doves together and we get peaceful true love.




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angel_of_silenceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 12:41 am:
this is very nice, its short yet powerful, nice work
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 24 at 2:43 pm:
Hehe I read this once, guess I didn't comment....but A+ I loved it
 
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abcxyzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 22 at 2:49 am:
You described the thought wonderfully...its diffrent..nice 1
 
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LiraDaerisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18 at 12:59 am:
Got some good thoughts going in this. Though the meter could use some ironing out and then change teh rhyme for "love." "Dove" is a very hackneyed rhyme for it, and you use it in another spot, so use a different word to make your poem pop
 
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LivelyJadeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 14 at 8:53 am:
Love it :D
 
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ZainabSThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 2 at 3:47 pm:
Gorgeous :D
 
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EMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31 at 4:46 am:
This is a very beautiful poem! And I am enamored by that picture as well.... but your poem will be added to my favorites!
 
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Alisaluvzyou said...
Mar. 17 at 10:39 am:
Its really beautiful and well writen your a good poet  
 
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GLoveGGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18 at 12:19 pm:
I think this is a very well- written poem because you keep it simple, and don't try to over-write it. Its a very quiet beautiful
 
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MarrabelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17 at 11:01 pm:
moon light has always fasinated me...but never like this
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 15 at 4:23 pm:
It's a very serious poem but it is so filled with love
 
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in.this.momentThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 15 at 12:01 am:
I really like it! It's sweet(:
 
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AmieeHope-SierraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14 at 11:57 am:
I really love this poem. I think the emotion is definetly there and as always it should be. It gave me chills and really brought tears to my eyes. So really keep up the work. :)
 
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MileyLuvzYaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13 at 11:32 pm:
It's really sweet nice poem
 
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You.N.Me-ForeverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5 at 2:19 pm:
its really good. i enjoyed reading it.(:
 
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you_n_me_forever said...
Feb. 5 at 2:19 pm:
awww how sweet! this is a good poem! :D
 
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Myletas_Tears said...
Feb. 4 at 3:51 pm:
I thought this was absolutely beautiful... It was sweet and gave me butterflies just reading it. Write more like this :) 
 
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Scribbleaway.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 29 at 8:30 am:
it could have been a little bit long thats reaally romantic
 
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WhiteSwan13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 20 at 11:03 pm:
I really liked it! :)
 
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baileyanneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 15 at 2:37 pm:
Short yet romantic! I love romance so it was perfect!! :P
 
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