Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > High Aim High Aim By Hamzawaseem, Lahore, Pakistan More by this author Like hawk, I want to fly, And conquer the limitless sky, It's no problem to aim high, Let me give it a try! « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 23 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Jade.I.Am said... today at 2:47 pm: I like it...hey this reminds me of a poem I wrote "touch the sky" will u read it? It's 4 lines ;) Report abuse LivelyJade said... Apr. 14 at 8:42 am: Very inspirational! I love it! :D Report abuse KayleneB said... Apr. 4 at 1:16 pm: Short sweet and it took a landing right into my heart It was beautiful and completely true I love it (: Report abuse Fallenoutofgrace said... Apr. 1 at 3:11 pm: I like it its nice :3 Report abuse Sunny225LuvsHugs said... Mar. 24 at 4:04 pm: nice way to keep it short but still got the message out Report abuse Sabeen_Yameen said... Feb. 20 at 2:59 am: :) Report abuse in.this.moment said... Feb. 15 at 12:36 am: (: you are quite talented. Never stop writing! <3 Report abuse AnushAndMalachi said... Feb. 11 at 4:17 pm: NIce poem i love the message in it Report abuse EnnaGirl said... Jan. 30 at 11:47 pm: Short and sweet! Report abuse loveshersheys said... Jan. 16 at 11:16 am: Short poem with a beautiful and a motivating meaning. Report abuse baileyanne said... Jan. 14 at 2:46 pm: This is very short and straight to the point! Yet, it is full of meaning! Love it :P Report abuse Kiry12 said... Jan. 13 at 3:01 am: i love the message in this Report abuse country-cutey said... Jan. 12 at 12:08 pm: i love the ending good job Report abuse DestroyedHeart said... Jan. 10 at 12:24 am: Not as good as the others Report abuse GGLovesAPartner said... Jan. 7 at 12:14 pm: ...Exactly how I've always felt.. but never have been able to do. ;) Report abuse MysticLady said... Jan. 6 at 11:59 pm: This is an energizing poem that makes me want to jump! Report abuse compassion said... Jan. 3 at 10:13 am: Love the first and the last lines a lot :) Report abuse B.C.S. said... Jan. 2 at 3:50 pm: short and sweet. good. Report abuse SkylerMorningstar said... Dec. 31, 2012 at 1:49 pm: its nice :) Report abuse Zoya_Khan said... Dec. 31, 2012 at 12:41 pm: Nice :) :) :) Back to top « Previous 1 2 Next »
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