Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Rainbow Rainbow By Hamzawaseem, Lahore, Pakistan More by this author Giving an upbeat to the beauty, The hearts of the people soften, As they exclaim, "What a beauty!" « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 13 comments. Post your own! Report abuse abcxyz said... today at 2:53 am: Short and sweet.. Report abuse Jade.I.Am said... Apr. 20 at 1:58 pm: hmmm did you mean to repeat "beauty"? anyways, i liked the dialogue happening in this. interesting! XD Report abuse BlurAngel said... Apr. 7 at 2:51 pm: Loved it.. short and sweet... Report abuse Fallenoutofgrace said... Apr. 4 at 3:05 pm: short, sweet amazing to the last word Report abuse KayleneB said... Apr. 4 at 1:12 pm: Brilliant (: Report abuse gossamergirl said... Apr. 3 at 5:19 pm: Beautiful, truely beautiful. Keep up the good work. :) Report abuse Sunny225LuvsHugs said... Mar. 24 at 4:02 pm: beatuful and delightful ..... love how you kept it simple, still got the whole thought out...... Report abuse Sparkle1pops said... Feb. 17 at 11:00 am: This one is okay. It feels very repetitive when you use the word beautiful twice. the poem is to small for that. Report abuse in.this.moment said... Feb. 15 at 12:58 am: really beautiful Report abuse Monicaa said... Feb. 12 at 12:03 pm: I Love How It's Short And Simple But Yet Beautiful <3 Nice Job :) Report abuse loveshersheys said... Jan. 16 at 11:17 am: beautifully written poem. I love it! Report abuse baileyanne said... Jan. 15 at 2:31 pm: Short, sweet, and simple! Love it! Report abuse MysticLady said... Jan. 6 at 11:41 pm: Im in an organization for girls called the Rainbow Girls and this is very touching to me. its really good. May i show it to some of my friends in my organization?