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Hey! Time for a story,
But promise me not to be sorry,
As the tale is sad,
But that does not make it bad.

There was once a lad,
Who always seemed sad,
B'cause no friend, he had,
Too much anxiety he had.




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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 2:31 pm:
Hmmmm....tbh I'm not one for things that rhyme with the same sound all throughout.....especially when u repeat words.....:) just being honest
 
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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 21 at 11:52 am:
I love the intrigue but the repitition of "he had" kind of made my tongue a little uncomfortable as I recited it...but overall a nice piece...
 
HamzawaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 22 at 11:12 pm :
thank you :D
 
SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 5:00 am :
You're welcome!
 
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MackentoshThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 20 at 2:01 pm:
A small child, perhaps neglected or an orphan, lacks a true friend and suffers from anxiety. Interesting... :) Sparks my curiousity!
 
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joejinny said...
Apr. 18 at 3:34 am:
an incomplete story of lonliness. but wonderful poem
 
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AbbaDabbaDooThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 12 at 7:46 am:
Pretty and curious. Thank you for writing it. You have a gift!
 
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KayleneBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4 at 1:08 pm:
It's wonderful the way you wrote this to have an ambiguous ending
 
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FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1 at 3:08 pm:
your extremly talented, and amazing keep it up
 
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moet14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31 at 4:39 am:
Your very talented  
 
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Anathema-EquinoxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24 at 11:54 pm:
I like this poem because it makes you think. It makes you think of what the completed version of this poem would be. But since every person is different, people who read this poem will come up with different endings .
 
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Sabeen_YameenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19 at 5:21 am:
You know what....? it's fab! :)
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17 at 11:02 am:
I really like the common theme of this poem. It sticks out strongly. The picture very well acompanies the poem. 
 
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cookiemonster24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12 at 12:51 pm:
I wonder what is it about? But it was rally good. Use of words is very amusing.
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 10 at 1:24 pm:
I like this, but the last two linee have the same ending and that makes it sound kind of repetitive. 
 
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baileyanneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 15 at 2:22 pm:
I love how you leave the end up to peoples imagination.. very clever:)
 
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MysticLadyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 12:07 am:
Nice comment. Anyway i thought this poem reminded me of a friend but it was pretty good so yeah..... thanks again
 
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Jan. 7 at 6:52 am :
hey mystic its me 4..u promised to email me but u never did..anyway i just quitted on TI and am using my cousin's email to post here... but u know my own email,dont you?   sorry hamzawaseem :P ur poems real good
 
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HamzawaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 12:04 am:
:P...............................
 
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