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Smash the cold clocks
Trash the dials of light
Douse the Sun
Shroud the Moon in its own darkness
Have all measurements of time destroyed
Erased
Forgotten
Never to be recreated
Have space stop in mid-step
Let me remain in his arms
Kept in this lucid dream
Forever suspended in this sweet fantasy
Keep me away from the end
The sorrowful regrets
The imprint of his lips covered in my hidden by my lonely tears
Stop
The
Time




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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9 at 4:46 pm:
Oh, this is—this is magnificent. I like the style. Your emotion. Your message. 5 stars.
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 10 at 2:47 pm :
Thanks. Can I trust that you will be a permenant reader of my poetry? Oh yeah does it sound more clingy or despersate to you?  
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 11 at 1:37 pm :
Dont' worry you don't sound clingy. Just HOLLA! at me any time you have something new or something you want me to read.
 
angel_of_silenceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 4:22 pm :
this is very great work, fantastic
 
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ILuvBritishBoysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 6 at 9:42 am:
I wish that I could write like you! This I think may be my favorite one out o all your poems Ive read so far. My favorite lines are, "Douse the Sun, Shroud the Moon in its own darkness." To me those are the best part of the poem. Keep writing!! I look forward to reading more of your poems! :)
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 7 at 3:07 pm :
That means alot to me, but one does not measure oneself with some one else's ablility. I believe everyone has their own style of writing nd own creative nature. I stay true to my style is all. :)
 
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Apollo77This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 5 at 8:27 pm:
I love this. it's perfect with the perfect amount of emotion and the perfect amout kept out and put in. Perfect, really!
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 7 at 3:09 pm :
Thank You. I poured my time into this one. 
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25 at 3:36 pm:
I know this feeling - you described it so well! Good job!
 
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flannyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5 at 6:10 pm:
I really liked the meaning of this poem, about one who does not want to let go of a loved one, and I especially enjoyed how it was developed
 
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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 10:06 am:
This was really cool, I liked how you mentioned the sun and moon instead of just the clock... Added more imagery.
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 4 at 2:44 pm :
I loved that part as well. It's comforting to know someone enjoys my writing.
 
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