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Such a dismal kind of joy, it's
Blazing from your eyes.
Somehow without knowing, you
Can be so very wise.
Courtyard grown over wildly,
No palace for a queen.
A butter rush of anger claims
You, hostile and mean.



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StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 15 at 9:55 pm:
  This is really quite nice. I like the fact that the meaning is not instantly clear. By using symbolism to say what you wanted to say, you opened up the door for multiple different interpretations. I think the best writing is the kind that everyone can make their own, and you have done that here.   P.S. Great title!
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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 15 at 10:45 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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Feb. 7 at 7:47 pm:
Wow - i don't know what quite to make of this, but it definitely makes you think. Good job!
 
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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2 at 2:28 pm:
Interesting! I really had to think on this one. It's abstract and very symbolic, but I LOVE it. You did a fantastic job with this.
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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2 at 3:29 pm :
Thank you:) that means a lot
 
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