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Not Meant to Be

Folded amidst the air like a
Dying ember of flame.
The wings of a great bird or a
Angel that went, not came.
It's ink upon the paper now
And cannot be erased.
A love not meant to be, it is,
A feeling not embraced.




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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2 at 2:27 pm:
Perfect. Not to abstract, not too literal. I find this an amazing poem. There's not words to describe it, honestly. It reminds me of a song I wrote about something that used to be there. THis is amazing; great job.
 
RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2 at 3:33 pm :
Thank you! My poems are never very literal, so I'm glad someone can appreciate them.
 
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